2003-07-31 11:28 a.m.
Cinderellen Grammar - (14/15) I see a few little things here and there but there aren’t many things noticeable. They are mainly typos and with how much you write it isn’t very significant at all. Content - (43/45) I felt what you were trying to say in a lot of your entries. Sure there were few that were “writing for the sake of writing” but who doesn’t. Things you write about are relatable to people. A lot of it is heart felt, or so it seems. If it isn’t you are just really good at faking it. Sometimes your entries are a little long though, and I would find myself skimming a little. Maybe you should try to get right to the point with some things, not everything but just here and there stuff. You explain yourself a lot. There shouldn’t be a reason for that. You are writing to your diary, not to the people of the world who read it. Layout - (9/10) I like the one you have, very nice. You change these a lot. They all are nice and I got to know your tastes a little better through the change, but it did get a little annoying. Updating - (5/5) You do really well in you updating, only few missed days here and there that I saw. Contacts - (10/10) Email, notes, guest book Getting around - (9/10) Getting around was easy enough. I would just make one little change, make a link to your cast on your main page. I didn’t find it until I started exploring, but it was easy enough. Fun stuff - (6/5) There is a nice amount of extra stuff here. Plenty to keep the reader busy. I really liked the layout page, the favorite entries and ABC‘s. Extra Credit - (0/5) Over All - (96/100) Comments - It’s a nice diary, I share a lot of your views. You seem very opinionated and you like to voice those in your diary. I will probably be back just to see what is happening in your life, and seeing where those opinions take you, if anywhere. Reviewed by - Sarah previous | next |
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